Warriors–Power of Three: Outcast
by Erin Hunter
c. 2008
Getting more mystical than the previous Warrior’s series’ of tales. This one involves Lionpaw seeing and being trained by the “ghosts” of his grandfather and uncle Tigerstar and Hawkfrost as well as mysterious visits from an ancient ghost cat named Rock to Jaypaw.
This book is almost parts of two books pressed abnormally together. First we have the story of the three apprentices, children of Brambleclaw and Squirrelflight trying to come to terms with their gifts and trying to understand what they should do with them and wondering why the other cats couldn’t see them.
Then, midway through the book, we have visitors from the mountains telling of the Tribe cats in serious trouble. This revives the travelers from The New Prophecy to reunite and go to the mountains taking along the three gifted apprentices and Crowfeather’s son, Breezepaw whom no one, including Crowfeather, likes.
Along the way, they meet up with Purdy, the former kittypet loner who helped the cats along on their first journey. The apprentices arrive at a new appreciation for loners and kittypets but the reason is never clear what his presence is suppose to accomplish in the story.
When they arrive in the mountains, they are told to go home as they are not wanted. Meanwhile, intruders are stealing prey from the Tribe and the Tribe is all but starving, retreating to its cave behind the waterfall. While the Clan cats sleep, Jaypaw joins Stoneteller in a journey to visit with The Tribe of Endless Hunting. They have no answers for the Tribe of Rushing Water and abandon them. When Jaypaw confronts the ancestral tribe, they tell him they don’t have answers and the Tribe must make its own way, move or die.
Over time, Brambleclaw manages to convince the Tribe to try some Clan ways but it is met with opposition as those are Clan ways and not Tribe ways. In the end, they discover that the Intruders have no honor, they fight a battle the Tribe and Clan cats win but even with promises by the Intruders, there is no real hope of a lasting peace.
The book ends abruptly with Jaypaw learning from Rock that the Tribe used to live where the Clans do now and telling his siblings that Star Clan did not send them nor did Tribe of Endless Hunting request them–they are there for themselves. And then as he launches into a story, the book is over.
Not a satifactory ending though it does lead the reader into the next book. We are left with no hope for the Tribe, no return home for the Clan, and no answers for Stoneteller or the Apprentices. Rather than a story well told, this is more like a Soap Opera. And with the Ancestors of the Tribe abandoning the Tribe, it either lends to the notion that there is no one all-knowing or all-powerful or that ancestor worship doesn’t work, or both.
Go back to your first series Erin and try to recapture the way the story was put together. It used to be about cat and Clan interaction. Now it’s about mysticism and dreams. Let’s go back to reality and have cats helping cats rather that walking with shadowy ghosts and in a dreamworld.